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Deena
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I hope this is supposed to be satire. If not, it's moronic.
— Jun 19, 2017 06:21PM
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Kim
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This is as far as I got before deciding I didn't like the characters, the story, or the writing.
— Apr 17, 2017 10:07AM
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Jo
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Hmmm, I'm not sure if the vulgar language is a result of the American/English differences in meaning around body part words, but it has crossed over into the language of porn, which would only be used out loud by half-cut lads who don't yet know how to pleasure a woman. Where's the steampunk? Also, the writing is disjointed. The author can clearly see what is happening, but has not conveyed it to the reader well.
— Dec 28, 2015 08:47PM
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