Jo’s Reviews > The Seduction of Phaeton Black > Status Update

Hmmm, I'm not sure if the vulgar language is a result of the American/English differences in meaning around body part words, but it has crossed over into the language of porn, which would only be used out loud by half-cut lads who don't yet know how to pleasure a woman. Where's the steampunk? Also, the writing is disjointed. The author can clearly see what is happening, but has not conveyed it to the reader well.