Status Updates From Moonlight, Tiger, and Smoke

Man, this needs a stronger edit. Lots of little plot details that contradict each other, and some of the sex scene writing is just silly. ("Interior muscles"? Because there's such a thing as exterior muscles?)

Man, this needs a stronger edit. Lots of little plot details that contradict each other, and some of the sex scene writing is just silly. ("Interior muscles"? Because there's such a thing as exterior muscles?)

"You still think about him," he said softly. "Your true love. The man you ran away with. The one you couldn't live without." Autumn lifted an eyebrow. "It's funny. He's gone and yet, here you are. Still breathing. You managed to live without him after all."

Moonlight suppressed his reaction to the onmyoji's words and made himself answer calmly. "This isn't life."

"Sir?" Smoke looked up from his visual exam of Tiger.
"He's been kept behind bars, chained, and beaten when necessary, to quote the commander." Raven shook his head.

Another victim. Barbaric. I'm so ready to berserk any time.

Fuck. This book is such a torture to read. But I have to finish this. After all of the damn things happened to Moonlight, I want HEA!!!

OMG Autumn... If he's real, I want to throttle him to death for making Moonlight's life miserable. >=(

Smoke would give all he had to Moonlight, including his life, and never ask for anything in return. He wasn't motivated by the thought of any reward he might receive; he simply couldn't conceive of standing idle if the one he loved needed his help. Even if the loved one was never aware of the help.

ROFL...."Chinko". XDD I didn't expect to see this word in English novel, lol. If you read yaoi manga, you'll know instantly what Chinko is. *Let me ROFL again XDDD*

Tiger...oh Tiger... Was he a realist or a coward? *Sighing hard*

WHAT?? Autumn The Onmyoji watched Moonlight and Tiger's manhood ceremony aka lovemaking session??? O__O Damn, that's really caught me off guard...
Cunning and slick, that Onmyoji... He's planning to use their love for the organization's advantage...

If Moonlight laughed, Tiger's heart leaped. If Moonlight was angry, Tiger's heart shrank. If Moonlight was sad, Tiger's heart ached.

I really like this three lines. It's like Chinese poetry.

Really sad.... I mean really....

The beginning of this is absolutely gripping.

Omg! I want mooooooooooooooooore!!!!!!!!!

I'm so hooked right now I don't want to stop but I'm so tired and this pounding in my head is just getting worse. Gaaah

I knew it :'(

Oh god oh god! Why do I have this feeling that something bad is going to happen?!?

It just hit me that the title has 3 names in it. For some reason I didn't think all three were people so now I'm kinda worried its a ménage. Eck!

Drama, drama, drama

Oh my lord of the rings. This book is ROCKING my nerves!!!