Kirsten’s Reviews > Moonlight, Tiger, and Smoke > Status Update
Kirsten
is 25% done
Man, this needs a stronger edit. Lots of little plot details that contradict each other, and some of the sex scene writing is just silly. ("Interior muscles"? Because there's such a thing as exterior muscles?)
— Mar 17, 2016 03:59AM
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Kirsten
is 25% done
Man, this needs a stronger edit. Lots of little plot details that contradict each other, and some of the sex scene writing is just silly. ("Interior muscles"? Because there's such a thing as exterior muscles?)
— Mar 17, 2016 03:58AM
