Status Updates From Blood Heavy (Blood Heavy, #1)

An interesting story of every day teens with paranormal powers.

I don't mind swearing, but this is a little too much. This is suppose to be YA, and they are constantly swearing. Not only in dialoge, also describing how someone fell on her ass (instead of behind).

Show don't tell.......

Instead, the suspense was already given away, when you mentioned Claire's name(and I guessed right after the call, it should have been Cassandra who is fighting).

When a stranger suddenly shows up, don't write the name of the person. Wait till the person is interduced later.

This really needs to be edited. The idea is great, but getting Claire and Cass mixed up is not good.

The Jerry plays Rambo stuff is annoying but the book is enjoyable

Decent story though Jerry is getting on my nerves a bit

ok I get the name thing now. its still kinda annoying. the characters are developing and I'm getting into the action

what is the Daniel/Jerry name change? kinda frustrating and pointless maybe it will make since later in the book

Can't put it down!! Great book!!

So far, really liking the story and the dialogue is very entertaining!! I'm gonna have trouble putting this one down!!

The story is really cool, but the typos and poor editing are slowing me down!