Status Updates From The Cahokian

This story and all its significance is such pleasure to read you forget you are learning great new historic facts ..I am amazed at how this story swells and ebbs as I read it .. What a great beginning they gave all of us.. And pride in my heritage as minor as it is .. Great writing and such passion gives me goose bumps!

I am really enjoying my dip into the past and viewing the world learning how to be democratic through the Iriqous world and the native people we adopted it from ! Plus a great storyline!

Finished Jan 28. Very interesting history of the peoples of the Ancient Americas.

A very interesting story comparing the different native people of North America.

Ancient America. love it

Sad. Could've been a wonderful book had it not been for awful editing (or complete lack of editing). It hurts me to have to say such a thing, but the truth is that I'm not overly picky about a few errors here & there, however, this was so bad as to truly inhibit my enjoyment of the book. :(

Version I re-downloaded from Smashwords hoping it would be updated/edited isn't. Still a good story being chopped apart & difficult to read due to all the errors. Very depressing as this tale has so much potential. :(

An updated review says it's now been edited & is less choppy, so I re-downloaded it. Resuming reading in hopes this will resolve the issue. Zoe Saadia truly is telling a good & well-researched story here, but the poor editing was causing reading it to be an experience akin to listening to your favorite song on a warped & scratched record.

I love the ancient history of the Americas.

Interesting story, but bad editing is detracting from the magic of it & making it a choppy, difficult read. :(

A sad twist. x Didn't see that one coming:-( But riveted to this book. x

What a picture! This book has the most amazing imagery you will ever come across.

What a vivid and beautiful writing style this author has. x

Oh Acoto, what choices will you make??

the same words are misspelled over and over!!

Still really loving the story. Still really annoyed by all of the editting issues.