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Sherri Keller
is on page 16 of 232
"his blond coat shinning in the morning sunshine"
You mean shining.
Ssh! D'you want to get sued?!
— Jun 28, 2012 09:20AM
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You mean shining.
Ssh! D'you want to get sued?!
Sherri Keller
is on page 16 of 232
The story is interesting so far, but the book really needs an editor to bring it up to a professional level of writing. I've found several errors so far. This sentence is on page 16: "A chill passed threw her body just thinking about those times."
— Jun 28, 2012 06:51AM
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Wayne Michael
is on page 10 of 232
Interesting story. Wondering if this is geared for must younger readers than myself.
— Feb 17, 2012 10:25AM
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