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Sherri Keller
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The story is interesting so far, but the book really needs an editor to bring it up to a professional level of writing. I've found several errors so far. This sentence is on page 16: "A chill passed threw her body just thinking about those times."
— Jun 28, 2012 06:51AM
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Sherri Keller
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"his blond coat shinning in the morning sunshine"
You mean shining.
Ssh! D'you want to get sued?!
— Jun 28, 2012 09:20AM
You mean shining.
Ssh! D'you want to get sued?!
