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Samuel
is finished
Ends as definitely the first in a series; characters divided, action taking place in the sky, but somehow just a little resolved also. Kelly is quite smart -- thinks in 3D and around over and through. Dont quite understand how the magic "works" or what makes one Mage better or worse than another -- even a beginner. But maybe there is no such "system"? Hm...
— Dec 21, 2012 08:50AM
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Samuel
is 55% done
Teen contemporary fantasy not full of whining and angst and pining for vampires? Yes.
— Dec 19, 2012 08:42PM
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Samuel
is 12% done
Starts in Chicago 1871 as the great fire breaks out. Forward to modern day downtown Dubuque, a black teen girl from Chicago, a mysterious old homeless man, and a strange bookstore. Narration is good but recording has a few issues which plosives (p, b, t) and at times variations in volume (moving closer and further from the mic) and a few mic stand adjustments here and there. But gets stronger with every chapter.
— Dec 19, 2012 06:38AM
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JW
is on page 82 of 288
Never read about children or animals. I just waded through a chapter of both.
— Jul 30, 2010 07:28AM
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JW
is on page 51 of 288
Picking up fast, but some questionable POV choices. Like a 5 yo boy and a naggy wife prone to migraines.
— Jul 12, 2010 08:17AM
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