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there are a lot of small grammar typos that an editor should've caught before sending this to print (the character's name "rains" in possessive form as rain's not rains', missing commas in address like "we have to go Joe" instead of "we have to go, Joe") but otherwise the writing is really quite good.
— Apr 01, 2025 01:04PM
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