Status Updates From Down and Dirty

This one may be a struggle. I get clicking with someone and tumbling in to bed, but this reads weird.

Urggggggg. I don't get it.

I do not think Harry has any feelings for Clyde.

I'm confused.

Again with grown men crying all the damn time. Ok, so I was really enjoying this but I'm not liking where she went with Clyde. I guess I can understand it but I already liked them as a threesome. She didnt have to do him dirty like that.

Aww, Clyde scared Jean with the dungeon proposal and almost caught a beat down from Harry. That's right Harry, protect your man! I'm starting to feel sorry for Clyde though. As is often the case in /m/m/m novels, two of the characters share a deeper bond than the third.

Harry called! Woohoo!! *Jumps up and does a booty shake*. I am so loving the dynamic among these three.

Come on, man! Clyde and Harry, let's get it done already. She keeps skirting around it, having them give each other little pecks, or little licks. Let's get 'er done! Go big or go home! :-)

And here we have it! I love you after 2 days. Never fails. Still enjoying the book though. Harry gives me butterflies in the stomach and I love how Clyde balances him.

Amazed that Harry is ok with all this. I'm liking him and Clyde though. Also, just have to say that GA cannot write sex. I'm sorry. Yes, she's gotten much better but 'his c*ck was running with precum' makes me think of an STD. 'Clyde went into an orgasm soon after.' Huh?? No, gracias. Still, it's hot because of Harry.

Amazed that Harry is ok with all this. I'm liking him and Clyde though. Also, just have to say that GA cannot write sex. I'm sorry. Yes, she's gotten much better but 'his c*ck was running with precum' makes me think of an STD. 'Clyde went into an orgasm soon after.' Huh?? No, gracias. Still, it's hot because of Harry.

Amazed that Harry is ok with all this. I'm liking him and Clyde though. Also, just have to say that GA cannot write sex. I'm sorry. Yes, she's gotten much better but 'his c*ck was running with precum' makes me think of an STD. 'Clyde went into an orgasm soon after.' Huh?? No, gracias. Still, it's hot because of Harry.

Amazed that Harry is ok with all this. I'm liking him and Clyde though. Also, just have to say that GA cannot write sex. I'm sorry. Yes, she's gotten much better but 'his c*ck was running with precum' makes me think of an STD. 'Clyde went into an orgasm soon after.' Huh?? No, gracias. Still, it's hot because of Harry.

"What did they do to each other?? What did they do??" I wanna know too, Jean!

Well, this is uh interesting! Has the potential to be very hot.

Dag Harry, can the man have some foreplay?? That's gonna hurt! LOL

Ok, GA. I'm giving you one last chance. I'm going in. Sample first.