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I don’t see how the author could possibly have had much experience with kids with the way these four-year-olds are speaking and interacting. Also, I just came across a section where the parents said their four-year-old is reading Trixie Belden mysteries, which is not impossible, but not likely. It’s possible the books are being read to her, but that’s not clear.

I’m having a hard time swallowing 4 year olds talking like 10 year olds.

Olive and Olivia in the same book?! It’s hard enough to keep track of all the couples. Adding to the mix 2 way too similar names for their kids is frustrating for me as a reader.