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Zippy
Zippy is 77% done
I don’t see how the author could possibly have had much experience with kids with the way these four-year-olds are speaking and interacting. Also, I just came across a section where the parents said their four-year-old is reading Trixie Belden mysteries, which is not impossible, but not likely. It’s possible the books are being read to her, but that’s not clear.
Aug 18, 2025 05:13PM
Make Broom For Daddy (Return to Magic, #1-3)

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Zippy
Zippy is 43% done
I’m having a hard time swallowing 4 year olds talking like 10 year olds.
Aug 15, 2025 03:23PM
Make Broom For Daddy (Return to Magic, #1-3)


Zippy
Zippy is on page 27 of 665
Olive and Olivia in the same book?! It’s hard enough to keep track of all the couples. Adding to the mix 2 way too similar names for their kids is frustrating for me as a reader.
Aug 14, 2025 06:49AM
Make Broom For Daddy (Return to Magic, #1-3)


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