Status Updates From Xenoform

"That's the name of the mov...Uhm...BOOK!"
Hmmm I feel like I should care about these characters at this point but I can hardly tell them apart...
This whole thing feels like someone wrote down a shadowrun game they played.

We might actually be reaching something interesting. But it sure is a bit of a slog huh, not very likeable characters.

What was the Family in the car About?

This is starting to feel like a P&P campaign, with the harvester group feeling like silly characters...

Okay - Here we go more traditional story. The "hero" prefacing action with a paragraph of "He had never done it before, but he just knew he could do it" is already old, hopefully this is a product of something put in his head, otherwise that's just too flourish filled writing.

Hmmm, Many characters with scifi names. Many random shoutouts of Scifi sounding words.

Saying sci-fi words, do not make sci-fi...