Anders Hejnfelt’s Reviews > Xenoform > Status Update
Anders Hejnfelt
is 27% done
What was the Family in the car About?
This is starting to feel like a P&P campaign, with the harvester group feeling like silly characters...
— Sep 26, 2025 12:09AM
This is starting to feel like a P&P campaign, with the harvester group feeling like silly characters...
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Anders Hejnfelt
is 86% done
"That's the name of the mov...Uhm...BOOK!"
Hmmm I feel like I should care about these characters at this point but I can hardly tell them apart...
This whole thing feels like someone wrote down a shadowrun game they played.
— Oct 14, 2025 12:39AM
Hmmm I feel like I should care about these characters at this point but I can hardly tell them apart...
This whole thing feels like someone wrote down a shadowrun game they played.
Anders Hejnfelt
is 50% done
We might actually be reaching something interesting. But it sure is a bit of a slog huh, not very likeable characters.
— Sep 30, 2025 11:37PM
Anders Hejnfelt
is 20% done
Okay - Here we go more traditional story. The "hero" prefacing action with a paragraph of "He had never done it before, but he just knew he could do it" is already old, hopefully this is a product of something put in his head, otherwise that's just too flourish filled writing.
— Sep 23, 2025 05:44AM
Anders Hejnfelt
is 17% done
Hmmm, Many characters with scifi names. Many random shoutouts of Scifi sounding words.
— Sep 21, 2025 11:21PM

