Status Updates From Murder in Transit (Railway ...

I’m sorry but like I really do not like the writing style
And call me woke but I also don’t like the way he’s describing the women. He’s objectifying them even when the woman is talking. Maybe I’m not giving it enough chance but I’m just…no

Again, it’s very…TELLING
not showing.
Like he’s explaining the plan and why us worked to her as if she isn’t part of it. Like bro she already knows..be more creative in which you tell us.

Obviously it was all a ruse and she was in cahoots with the drunk guy but my god. I feel like you can tell it’s written by a man.. HOWEVER I shall give it a chance.

SORRY WTF JUST HAPPENED

Okay, very early to judge but their writing is very telling not showing. It’s very quick paced with short sentences. It’s very easy to read but idk if I like it like that…we’ll see. I’m not gonna immediately DNF this, that’d be crazy.