Status Updates From The Stolen Kingdom

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This fight scene isn’t that exciting, I’m sorry...

happy belated thanksgiving to all of you !

Rosemarie is so outspoken and defiant! ...but proceeds to not actually DO anything. She wishes she could, of course, because she’s a spunky and modern woman, but there’s JUST nothing to be done but wait for the men to rescue her. -_-

Finally a flaw—impulsivity. But he sees reason within ten seconds, so I’m still a little bored with the character development here.
The Pooglie-Wooglie story, though ridiculous, was interesting and entertaining.

Of COURSE Taylor James found the opening to the cave. Because he’s a Mary Sue.
Meanwhile, Rosemarie ALMOST did something.

Rosemarie was such a spunky kid, and now she’s just this useless arm candy for Taylor James and it bothers me a lot. “Oh, Taylor! How could I ever think straight when my mind is on you all of the time?” Really? -_-
Also, the fact that there’s not one, but THREE brutes (Rahavi, Farv, and Nome) who are characterized by NOTHING but bloodlust is a little much.

Yeah, the more characters are introduced, the less interested I am. Because they’re all kind of the same...

Really? Taylor and Rosemarie’s quarrel lasted all of two seconds? I need more emotion to these characters. They’re all kinda flat...

So wait, did Courage just die with little more than a passing glance??
I will admit, the characterization is a BIT flat sometimes. A lot of telling, not showing, of feelings.

I would recommend The mirror of z Eliza

This is the book full of fact of time .