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Sharon
Sharon is 61% done
This book is sadly riddled with editing errors. Plus, I can now see the "whodunnit" coming with the speed of a runaway locomotive. :-(
Nov 26, 2011 08:17AM Add a comment
For the Helpless (Detective Kelly Lowe #1)

Sharon
Sharon is 61% done
This book is sadly riddled with editing errors. Plus, I can now see the "whodunnit" coming with the speed of a runaway locomotive. :-(
Nov 26, 2011 08:17AM Add a comment
For the Helpless (Detective Kelly Lowe #1)

Sharon
Sharon is 30% done
More people saying "OK," and a major continuity problem. Why doesn't it strike the detective as odd that her sometime boyfriend -- whom she has not told where she is staying -- shows up at her hotel?
Nov 25, 2011 12:09PM Add a comment
For the Helpless (Detective Kelly Lowe #1)

Sharon
Sharon is 16% done
Editing problems are kind of getting on my nerves. We've now met a character who says "OK" instead of "okay." :-(
Nov 25, 2011 05:51AM Add a comment
For the Helpless (Detective Kelly Lowe #1)

Sharon
Sharon is 15% done
I must confess, I'm developing a real pet peeve with authors who have their characters speak in acronyms and digits. No one says they are going to "BBQ" something (bee-bee-cue?) or says "come over at 3." And it's Aryan, not Arian.
Nov 22, 2011 12:27PM Add a comment
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