Status Updates From Fuera de Control

A reread of this series has been eye opening. I loved this the first time. This time? Still good, but lord, the female characters need slapped, and the men sometimes too.

Ugh. These books STILL need an edit. There’s no break between scene scenes. Nothing. It looks like part of the same scene/paragraph. It’s annoying to have to keep rereading parts to figure out what’s going on. EDIT