Status Updates From Stolen Pieces (Stolen Piece...

I'm gonna try to finish because the premise sounds good and there's so many 5 star reviews but the writing is throwing me off. There's pov changes mid page where one paragraph is the fmc, the next is another guy and then its back to her, and then time jumps with no page breaks or anything.

*spoilers*


Also she's sleeping with her coworker who is married to the m.e. and she also slept with the rookie 🤨