Status Updates From Tears of the Broken (Dark S...

Read from June 13 to 17, 2012
ReReadinf January 12 2015-

One reviewer mentioned the strange prologue that doesn't seem to have anything to do with the story; I believe it's to let us know that Ara's "death at birth" she'll be vamp material. Hope it comes soon cause I doubt I'll read any further books in this series.

This reads like Twilight fan fiction. I know there are those who will complain that I keep mentioning Twilight in my reviews, but this book not only gets close to directly quoting Twi, it also brings up Twi!

Why on EARTH did I not read the other reviews before picking up this "Twilight rewrite"? I rarely leave a book unfinished... I'm tempted now tho!! Twilight was horrible enough, this feels like an Aussie take on the story. Change a few things to keep the copyright police away.... So disappointed.

ok... I'm seriously confused. I know it's written in Aussie-English... but is it set in the USA or what? Every character speaks Aussie but they mention flags on the 4th of July? If you're going to write Aussie, that's fine, but here in the USA, we don't. Also... is she scarred? It's mentioned then seems to be forgotten. She's shy, then she's outgoing, then she's shy.... pick a trait!!

Ara found out that David is a vampire... Lately her reactions and so-called "short fuse" is starting to really make me hate her.

i am not sure if i like this book or not it has alot of boring parts then some are not so i am slowly reading it and deciding on it