Status Updates From Shrouds of Darkness (Brookl...

Now that's what I'm talkin' 'bout! Yes siree ...... no sparkly Twilight bullshit in this tome.

Kind of an interesting mix of vampire slash gun for hire.

Well, it does seem to be smoothing out and picking up. That's good.

...a scream cuts through the darkness. I pause, more out of curiosity than any sort of concern for whatever trouble a woman who was not smart enough to avoid has found...Probably just a whore getting slapped around by her pimp anyway.

Wow, victim blaming, dismissal of male responsibility for their own actions & dehumanisation/denial of human rights because involvement n the sex industry all in one passage

Not an auspicious start. Already we've had a 1st ch. that would be better termed a prologue, a lengthy flashback, reminiscing about a friend and an info-dump. I'm still waiting for more than about a page of actual story (and I'm not exaggerating).

If not for previous reviewers who promise it takes a few chapters to settle, I'd be considering a DNF.

I really hope it's not all written in this style.