Status Updates From Dreamwalker (Persephone's L...

hoping to finish today.... maybe the kids & dog will let me. Now to get off social media sites to read..

So bored!

The editing is terrible and it's almost like the book was translated from a different language. Some things are phrased very odd.

I just cannot get into this book!

Totally smiling like a giddy lil school girl

Ladies you need to read this book to tell me who is your fav male...... So conflicted

I smell a love triangle....

I was further along that I thought, this book moves fast & has a lot going on,... Kinda interested to see where this is going

Since I've done my laundry, all the dishes... And the work I can do while stranded in my house... I'll start reading for a bit... Lord I hope this entertaining cause I'm stir crazy

Let's do this ;)

I am not going to have anything nice to say about this book if I manage to finish it. The autor has mangled english grammar and language and obviously watched one too many action movies. You do not cock the safety off on a gun, you release or engage it. The only part of a gun that can be cocked is the hammer. This woman has no idea how to write or accurately describe what's happening during a given situation.

The writing is aweful! It's incredibly frustrating to read the incorrect sentences, misuse of words, disorienting sentence structures and transition. The whole book is a shining example of why people who wish to write should pay attention in grammar class.

The tense shifts are really frustrating and inconsistent but there is potential in the story.