moonlightfairyprincess’s Reviews > Dreamwalker > Status Update
moonlightfairyprincess
is 25% done
I am not going to have anything nice to say about this book if I manage to finish it. The autor has mangled english grammar and language and obviously watched one too many action movies. You do not cock the safety off on a gun, you release or engage it. The only part of a gun that can be cocked is the hammer. This woman has no idea how to write or accurately describe what's happening during a given situation.
— Apr 21, 2013 04:19AM
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moonlightfairyprincess’s Previous Updates
moonlightfairyprincess
is 20% done
The writing is aweful! It's incredibly frustrating to read the incorrect sentences, misuse of words, disorienting sentence structures and transition. The whole book is a shining example of why people who wish to write should pay attention in grammar class.
— Apr 20, 2013 07:20AM
moonlightfairyprincess
is 5% done
The tense shifts are really frustrating and inconsistent but there is potential in the story.
— Apr 12, 2013 02:43AM
