Status Updates From Twisted Loyalties, Part 1

Besides the grammatical errors, I liked the storyline; however, there are many unanswered questions ... I guess I would have to read the second installment to get those questions answered. I would also state that there are several characters to keep up with and that was a little disheartening!

If I wasn't this far in the book, I'd stop reading it. So glad it's a short story.

Also, I'm ONLY 2% done and the author has introduced at LEAST 6 diff characters.

I wish authors would learn the difference between "bought" and "brought." The errors are already annoying me.