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ive only read a bit more from my last note but Aila, Jack and the rest of the troupe have all met now, and its very rushed. weve rushed into them immediately feeling very close and it feels like we skipped actual bonding scenes, and just get informed that this felt important and they’re connected now.
It’s all very ‘tell don’t show’ and that’s been fairly indicative of the weak writing in this book so far.
— Apr 20, 2026 08:16AM
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It’s all very ‘tell don’t show’ and that’s been fairly indicative of the weak writing in this book so far.
