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Valley Forge
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David Garland

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— Feb 18, 2024 01:54PM Add a comment

Michael S Burnett is on page 162 of 320

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Michael S Burnett is on page 97 of 320

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Michael S Burnett is on page 62 of 320

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Janet LM is on page 214 of 320

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Janet LM is on page 186 of 320

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Janet LM is on page 162 of 320

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Janet LM is on page 116 of 320

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Janet LM is on page 45 of 320

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Janet LM is on page 28 of 320

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Quinn Edelson is on page 37 of 320

Finally figured it out. There's no info with the dialogue to place the characters in space. It's like they just stand there and talk at each other. It keeps distracting me from the story!

— Sep 23, 2015 08:10AM Add a comment

Quinn Edelson is on page 30 of 320

I keep getting distracted by the dialogue. It's...off somehow. It doesn't feel authentic.

— Sep 23, 2015 07:53AM Add a comment