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Quinn Edelson
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Finally figured it out. There's no info with the dialogue to place the characters in space. It's like they just stand there and talk at each other. It keeps distracting me from the story!
— Sep 23, 2015 08:10AM
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Quinn Edelson
is on page 30 of 320
I keep getting distracted by the dialogue. It's...off somehow. It doesn't feel authentic.
— Sep 23, 2015 07:53AM
