Status Updates From Omega Place

It still feels very child like in the writing. I still don’t know what the actual story is. It’s very vague and not well written. I don’t know if I should keep reading or not.

I’ve only read thirty pages and I know that it’s written with a different dialect/speech...but it still seems as if there are a lot of grammatical errors. I’ll keep reading for now but I’m getting the sense a child could have written this.

a little weird but kinda cool...