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Sydney Marshall
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It still feels very child like in the writing. I still don’t know what the actual story is. It’s very vague and not well written. I don’t know if I should keep reading or not.
— May 17, 2018 01:27PM
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Sydney Marshall
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I’ve only read thirty pages and I know that it’s written with a different dialect/speech...but it still seems as if there are a lot of grammatical errors. I’ll keep reading for now but I’m getting the sense a child could have written this.
— May 11, 2018 12:47PM
