Status Updates From Permutation City

Nothing about the plot felt like it flowed into the next piece, any moral conflict about digital life in the first 70% of the book had no impact or even mention in the latter parts??; so I guess every time I was like whatever this is lame was true because it didn’t matter after all. Doesn’t help that the audiobook narrator is so dull. I wish there was some cause and effect

Things r happening so fast why was there smut and why is her bf literally nowhere in her mind while she’s with this old guy

Bro what do u mean “half sisterly half sexual”