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Veronica
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Grammer and spelling mistakes throughout too. That's annoying and really unprofessional
May 19, 2017 10:48AM Add a comment
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Veronica
Veronica is finished
Also, it made more sense as to why the series is called "Family By Choice." as a lot of the history was covered in this novel and how/why they are all connected.
May 19, 2017 06:54AM Add a comment
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Veronica
Veronica is finished
Finished on 05/19/17

Nadler has gotten a little better especially with the cliffhanger at the end. However, there was still a lot of filler copy that is unnecessary.

I'm pretty sure I said this earlier but I wanted this to focus more on Julie and Bill but it was focused on Tommy and Brittany which should have happened in the previous book, "If Only."

2.5 out of 5 stars.
May 19, 2017 06:50AM Add a comment
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Veronica
Veronica is on page 259
I've noticed two errors. One was during a flashback when Bill was oversees saying he was serving and jack and Stephanie began seeing each other. From what I remember with book one, bill was home when jack and Stephanie were dating, even in the beginning.

There is also a line that says "jack is on he floor playing with his mobile" and they mean Julie's baby David. This stuff erks me. Aren't there proofreaders?!
May 06, 2017 06:45PM Add a comment
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Veronica
Veronica is on page 197
This is how Book two should have been written/ended! This book is,once again, too focused on the other couples rather than Bill and Julie. I didn't mind focusing on Brittany and Tommy because book two never did it! But this should be able bill and Julie with the other couples sparse throughout
May 03, 2017 03:24PM Add a comment
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Sandy
Sandy is finished
Let the wedding begin! The junior bride and groom, and the ring bearer...absolutely ADORABLE!
Jun 22, 2013 07:00AM Add a comment
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Sandy
Sandy is finished
My heart is breaking for Julie!
Jun 10, 2013 07:41AM Add a comment
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