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Grammer and spelling mistakes throughout too. That's annoying and really unprofessional
— May 19, 2017 10:48AM
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Also, it made more sense as to why the series is called "Family By Choice." as a lot of the history was covered in this novel and how/why they are all connected.
— May 19, 2017 06:54AM
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Veronica
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Finished on 05/19/17
Nadler has gotten a little better especially with the cliffhanger at the end. However, there was still a lot of filler copy that is unnecessary.
I'm pretty sure I said this earlier but I wanted this to focus more on Julie and Bill but it was focused on Tommy and Brittany which should have happened in the previous book, "If Only."
2.5 out of 5 stars.
— May 19, 2017 06:50AM
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Nadler has gotten a little better especially with the cliffhanger at the end. However, there was still a lot of filler copy that is unnecessary.
I'm pretty sure I said this earlier but I wanted this to focus more on Julie and Bill but it was focused on Tommy and Brittany which should have happened in the previous book, "If Only."
2.5 out of 5 stars.
Veronica
is on page 259
I've noticed two errors. One was during a flashback when Bill was oversees saying he was serving and jack and Stephanie began seeing each other. From what I remember with book one, bill was home when jack and Stephanie were dating, even in the beginning.
There is also a line that says "jack is on he floor playing with his mobile" and they mean Julie's baby David. This stuff erks me. Aren't there proofreaders?!
— May 06, 2017 06:45PM
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There is also a line that says "jack is on he floor playing with his mobile" and they mean Julie's baby David. This stuff erks me. Aren't there proofreaders?!
Veronica
is on page 197
This is how Book two should have been written/ended! This book is,once again, too focused on the other couples rather than Bill and Julie. I didn't mind focusing on Brittany and Tommy because book two never did it! But this should be able bill and Julie with the other couples sparse throughout
— May 03, 2017 03:24PM
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Sandy
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Let the wedding begin! The junior bride and groom, and the ring bearer...absolutely ADORABLE!
— Jun 22, 2013 07:00AM
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