Status Updates From Cleats In Clay

The psychic aspects of this add an extra degree of interest. It helped keep this from "going stale" as it might have done without.

This is my first experience with an M/M/M relationship which doesn't involve a solo joining a couple. Also with guys this age. The mechanics kind of gets in the way of the romantic aspects. It does encourage Sex the Sport more than Sex the Romance.

Putting this on hold indefinitely as not getting into it. The plot just seems silly, the accents weird and not engaging at all.
Not rating as I haven't read the full book.

So now the dead husband was psychic? Come on now. This whole book is turning out to be weird.

They met each other legit one day ago and they're already in a relationship? I know one can be naive about same-sex practices, but a 47yo should know better. He comes off more 17.

Very good so far. I am encouraged.

Hope this starts to get better soon or it's going to end up in the unable to finish pile.

Okay.Problem solved. :)

Not sure what's coming next-everything in the blurb is already complete. *shrug*

...on a relieved note...
no more "fireplugs" and stuff like that in the other bedroom scenes of the book (still...as an editor I'd have revised some adjectives there...like the "swelling") ;o)

"Instead, I get the clusterfuck freak show." He leaned forward aginst the table as he scowled."I'm some kind of villain for not supporting the team." He took a deep breath and slapped his palm on the table. "Never mind Nathan's fuckin' dead. There's a World Series to win."
"I hope the fuckers lost."
"Yep, they did."

...heh...on a positive note...a book reference about a book I love :o)

...hmm...