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Naomi is on page 258 of 293

it pisses me off how every two bloody seconds we have to hear Dru's exact thoughts in Italics. This is already first-person POV, i don't need an intermission to hear your literal thought process when i can just SEE it. Show don't tell, bruh.

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Naomi is on page 218 of 293

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Naomi is on page 182 of 293

omg no... a werewolf and vampire love triangle incoming...

— May 18, 2026 08:29PM Add a comment

Naomi is on page 150 of 293

there's too much fluff between plot points. so much time is spent on the most inconsequential of actions.
"Was describing your sandwich in detail necessary to our understanding of what happened?" -30ROCK, season 4 episode 4, Tracy [to Liz]

— May 18, 2026 03:54PM Add a comment

Naomi is on page 126 of 293

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Naomi is on page 95 of 293

"Eight thirty-eight p.m., or 1638 hours if you were all military"

am i mistaken or is this not correct? 8:38pm is 2038, right? 1638 would be 4:38pm

— May 13, 2026 11:08PM Add a comment

Naomi is on page 87 of 293

i cannot comprehend the fight scenes

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Naomi is on page 68 of 293

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