Naomi’s Reviews > Strange Angels > Status Update

it pisses me off how every two bloody seconds we have to hear Dru's exact thoughts in Italics. This is already first-person POV, i don't need an intermission to hear your literal thought process when i can just SEE it. Show don't tell, bruh.

there's too much fluff between plot points. so much time is spent on the most inconsequential of actions.
"Was describing your sandwich in detail necessary to our understanding of what happened?" -30ROCK, season 4 episode 4, Tracy [to Liz]

"Eight thirty-eight p.m., or 1638 hours if you were all military"

am i mistaken or is this not correct? 8:38pm is 2038, right? 1638 would be 4:38pm

i cannot comprehend the fight scenes

good strong start yipee