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Marie-Claude aka MC
is 41% done
Ok so there are many issues I have with this book. It doesn't Flow? everything feels forced. I don't feel anything, I'm being told a story instead of experiencing it. The backstories are... Useless? A lot of repetitions. A serious lack of vocabulary. this is just TOO simple. I'm not even sure if I have read a sentence that is longer than 7 words? The plot is nice. I wish the author would have a proper editor!
— May 29, 2015 03:56PM
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Marie-Claude aka MC
is 15% done
I'm digging the plot... But it seems this book needs major editing. I'm not a pro but this almost seem like a rough copy. Very simplistic writing, way too many repetitive words and I'm having a real hard time connecting with the characters... I'm lacking emotions... But again, interesting plot... Let's see how long I can keep up with it...
— May 28, 2015 09:13PM
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Sandra "Jeanz"
is 42% done
There's danger, betrayal and mystery all mixed together. So Ava has realised that regardless of what she chooses as a life direction i magic or no magic she still needs to learn the magic to be in with a chance o defending hersel against Lareina and her Clutch (guards)
— Jul 20, 2014 02:39AM
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Sandra "Jeanz"
is 29% done
So Ava is not just an Elementris, one of five. Ava is a True Elementris. What a great gift,she is meant to be the next queen but it's not all good news. The present Queen, Lareina doesn't want to move over for Ava in fact her guards the Lareina Clutch are out to kill Ava. In steps a rogue Lareina guard who wants to save Ava.
— Jul 19, 2014 04:31AM
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Sara
is 72% done
Things are heating up. Dang the need for sleep.
— Jul 03, 2014 10:21PM
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Sara
is 54% done
Oh my gosh! I think I know who Troy really is!
— Jul 03, 2014 08:53PM
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Julia
is 90% done
Really, a curse... I want my HEA!!! ::sticks out bottom lip::
— Mar 05, 2013 06:28AM
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Julia
is 65% done
Seriously Ava you ding dong.... Brew doesn't need that as much as you...
— Mar 04, 2013 11:42PM
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Julia
is 21% done
"Yes, but kill someone...?" - Ava Totally do it do it do it... Hehe
— Mar 03, 2013 09:09AM
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Julia
is 9% done
Well now, what would you do if you found out you had a huge decision to make within 2 months of turning 18!!!
— Mar 02, 2013 02:38PM
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