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Marie-Claude aka MC
is 15% done
I'm digging the plot... But it seems this book needs major editing. I'm not a pro but this almost seem like a rough copy. Very simplistic writing, way too many repetitive words and I'm having a real hard time connecting with the characters... I'm lacking emotions... But again, interesting plot... Let's see how long I can keep up with it...
— May 28, 2015 09:13PM
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Marie-Claude aka MC
is 41% done
Ok so there are many issues I have with this book. It doesn't Flow? everything feels forced. I don't feel anything, I'm being told a story instead of experiencing it. The backstories are... Useless? A lot of repetitions. A serious lack of vocabulary. this is just TOO simple. I'm not even sure if I have read a sentence that is longer than 7 words? The plot is nice. I wish the author would have a proper editor!
— May 29, 2015 03:56PM
