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Play for Me
by

Lois L. Kasznia (Goodreads Author)

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Sabrina Hijazi is starting

— Jul 11, 2015 12:20PM Add a comment

Julie is 72% done

Can something be boring and ridiculous at the same time?

— May 04, 2013 09:23AM Add a comment

Julie is 49% done

And now the Mary Sue heroine disgraces a supposed karate black belt

— May 03, 2013 08:37PM Add a comment

Julie is 39% done

Still have: bad dialogue, abuse of dialogue tags, and head-hopping. Heroine now thoroughly a Mary Sue. Writing is clearly amateurish. *sigh* Will be DNF'ing soon along with a review.

— May 02, 2013 10:08AM Add a comment

Julie is 2% done

Spoiled brat heroine + bad dialogue, abuse of dialogue tags, and head-hopping. Does not bode well...

— Apr 22, 2013 10:54PM Add a comment

Lorraine is 55% done

— Feb 20, 2013 05:09PM Add a comment

Lorraine is 40% done

— Feb 18, 2013 11:32AM Add a comment

Lorraine is finished

— Feb 18, 2013 11:32AM Add a comment