Julie’s Reviews > Play for Me > Status Update
Julie
is 39% done
Still have: bad dialogue, abuse of dialogue tags, and head-hopping. Heroine now thoroughly a Mary Sue. Writing is clearly amateurish. *sigh* Will be DNF'ing soon along with a review.
— May 02, 2013 10:08AM
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Julie
is 49% done
And now the Mary Sue heroine disgraces a supposed karate black belt
— May 03, 2013 08:37PM
Julie
is 2% done
Spoiled brat heroine + bad dialogue, abuse of dialogue tags, and head-hopping. Does not bode well...
— Apr 22, 2013 10:54PM