Status Updates From Fate War: Alliance
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Laura
is 30% done
More errors and the colloquial style are making it hard to get into the story, but it's intriguing.
— Feb 27, 2014 03:31AM
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Laura
is 26% done
Sad to say the grammatical errors have become so frequent that I'm now reading this with a proofreader's eye. It is still a good story, though.
— Feb 26, 2014 01:24AM
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Laura
is on page 19 of 271
Sad to find a few typos - it needs more attention to proofreading. Enjoyable so far, though.
— Feb 24, 2014 09:49AM
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Carmen
is 54% done
This is wonderful :) Great blend of steampunk and fantasy!
— Apr 12, 2013 03:49PM
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