Laura’s Reviews > Fate War: Alliance > Status Update

More errors and the colloquial style are making it hard to get into the story, but it's intriguing.

Sad to say the grammatical errors have become so frequent that I'm now reading this with a proofreader's eye. It is still a good story, though.

Sad to find a few typos - it needs more attention to proofreading. Enjoyable so far, though.