Status Updates From Consume Me (Burning Desire,...

SERIOUSLY I REALLY AM GETTING QUITE ANNOYED WITH THESE WOMEN IN THESE BOOKS. WHY IS IT THAT THEY GO ON & ON ABOUT BEING STRONG, & KEEPING AWAY, & THE MOMENT THE GAZILLIONAIRE EITHER KISSES OR TOUCHES THEM, THEY END UP PATHETIC MUSHY WOMEN? GRRR THE BOOK ISN'T BAD BUT I'VE HAD TO REREAD SOME PARTS AS THE WRITING IS A BIT CONFUSING. LET'S HOPE THE STORY GETS BETTER & CLEA GROWS SOME IRON BALLS...

I should be done with this book by now, but the writing mistakes and bad editing and grammar are really distracting. I am finding myself increasingly making highlights and notes. Either the writer has a very poor grasp of the English language and grammar or is just really lazy. Also, there are some glaring similarities to FSoG (watch your mouth; quit biting your lip; rules, rules, rules; etc.). It's frustrating.

I should be done with this book by now, but the writing mistakes and bad editing and grammar are really distracting. I am finding myself increasingly making highlights and notes. Either the writer has a very poor grasp of the English language and grammar or is just really lazy. Also, there are some glaring similarities to FSoG (watch your mouth; quit biting your lip; rules, rules, rules; etc.). It's frustrating.

This book really needs some serious editing. I am wondering if English is not this author's first language...

There's a difference in writing erotica and having a 50 shades type of book to actually pretty much writing the same scenarios! I am not one to trash books or authors. I can sincerely say that I am not enjoying this book and I am pretty close to leaving it -- 30 % left - should I keep reading? Or give up on it?

40% to go--- it can't come soon enough!!

It's taking me a bit to get into it. Mostly I feel because the author is being a bit redundant

Let's see how this goes

oh I really do like this book, but the author needs a better editor.

this is hard to read at times. I'm wondering if English is not the author's native language.

Im sorry what? I have to wake you up and ask permission to go for a run? WTH? Oh wait you will go with me, right? Oh please! Then you are pissed about this and decide to withhold orgasms as a punishment. Or you get help yourself and be punished and not get any sex for three days. What a dick move.

Not to bad. Kinda feels familiar to other books like this so far though.