Status Updates From Heartwood (Elemental Wars, #1)

"She was his Dux [leader], the leader of the Exercitus [army] army"

why are so many random nouns capitalised

why is almost every fantasy i read at the moment just meh is this some kind of regression to the mean after the jasmine throne or what

just one i picked up from the library.....back in march.....

Okay, I have a list twice as long as my arm of good books I could be spending my time on right now. I think I might have to give it up.
I am officially sick of reading the words: 'Obviously', 'Clearly' and 'Therefore'. Attempt at foreshadowing and romance is stodgy. I can't determine one character from the other, they're all so textbook. It's like the bastard daughter of a bastard son of a cousin of Game Of Thrones.

It is a very difficult thing for me to willingly not complete a book I have started. However, I am only on the second chapter and I'm already feeling I don't want to invest much more of my time on this.
The problem isn't the plot line or the lack of (in this case over-abundance) of world building. The problem I have with this is the heavy-handed, over explained, and completely stocky writing style/dare I say, script.