Status Updates From Someone Like You

Love the storyline, but the writing is horrible. It's almost painful to read. I am cringing on every page with grammatical errors and the same lines repeated ten times. It's too bad, with a better writer and editor it could have been really great.

Ugh. Ugh.

This book literally sounds like 5 year olds are speaking! "Dude! I'm stuck with this chick!" " dude! Throw one of you legendary parties!" "Dude! Is this chick hot?" Omds how am I going to survive this book when the hero sounds like an uneducated moron! Oh wait... He is one since his in collage to - and I quote - throw parties every day, skip lessons, barely make it throw, find 'chicks'!

This book literally sounds like 5 year olds are speaking! "Dude! I'm stuck with this chick!" " dude! Throw one of you legendary parties!" "Dude! Is this chick hot?" Omds how am I going to survive this book when the hero sounds like an uneducated moron! Oh wait... He is one since his in collage to - and I quote - throw parties every day, skip lessons, barely make it throw, find 'chicks'!