Status Updates From Gravity's Got Nothing on You

“Your love makes things levitate, guys, and you're not going to take advantage of this?" Laura asks, snorting like she's disappointed in them. "I can't believe you two.”

I feel like I've read this before, but I can't remember the ending.

This went from 3 stars to a 2 star DNF, so I'm going to gently put it away.

I get that a lot of fanfiction is pantsing, but it was really obvious here. The "just kiss" moments were way too forced, like Laura because one big annoying excuse. I also got tired of the constant snarling and overall bitterness in both Derek and Stiles. Overuse of "fucking" as an adjective devalued its impact. It's just so MEH.

Snarl this, snarl that. Can someone not snarl something out? Nope.

I dunno. The plot is okay, but there are way too many spelling mistakes and word choice issues.

Too much fake animosity between them. And how do the figurine wolves fit into it?

This is so effing good. Can't stop laughing.

OMG Laura us a Captain Kathryn Janeway fan! I love her!

Well, that just took a turn into WTF territory.

Ruh Roh. This is a long one. 252 pages. Eek. *breathing deeply* Okay. One page at a time.

It's my day off tomorrow and gonna finish this sucka! lol

Zosofi does well capturing the dynamic that they have on the actual show. “Stiles glares and pushes himself up off the couch. "Like you're all cotton candy and fucking rainbows, dude. Get your jacket and your camera, we're going out for froyo, fucker.”

The ending of that was really quite adorable.

I'm enjoying the second half of this way more than the first.

Pretend to be my boyfriend you say - my Sterek addiction contnues

Back to regular programming...

SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!

I think Stiles & Derek are now friends.

"I know who it is. I knew it. Fucking finally, you two got your shit together."

Derek is confused. "What?"

"You and Stiles!" Laura practically screams, and his stomach drops. "No more sexual tension. No more flirting thinly discussed as teasing. No more...wait, it is Stiles, isn't it? Your boyfriend."

"Oh god," Derek manages to say.

-HAHAHA!

MORE STEREK PLS!


I LOVE THE PREMISE! I'm excited to know what happens! :D