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Oh for FFS, she screwed up the pairings AGAIN Well I never ....

I was enjoying the story, but if you can't be bothered to make at least an editorial pass over your completed work and clean it up as an Indie Author, I have no obligation to hold on to my enthusiasm for your story.

What an epic mess of a book. Joan and Maikku are back together. Did an editor have a sip of wine and bingewatch netflix instead of editing with a fine tooth comb or nah🤷🏻‍♀️

Still ...they're a lot of hot aliens doing sinful things🔥

🤣 by chapter 19, Angela Castle has forgotten the pairings for each couple and Mixes it up. Here let me help.
●Anna and Morrdrook
●Abby The redhead and Nular
●Joan and Mukkia or whater.
Tell me why for the last chapters has she put Joan with Nular and Mukkia just vanished. Wonder if she course corrects in the next few pages?

Like gladiators a little confusing with the characters.Will read second book.

Too much errors with the writing and she got some of the characters mixed up. Found it too confusing, but eh I really liked this book ;-)