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Kaitlin
Kaitlin is on page 60 of 208
This is all moving rather quickly. They just met... There needs to be more build, more connection. They basically went from Hi my name is Parker, my name is Lily, to sleeping together, to now "He's mine." Eye roll... Oh! And the grammar and punctuation is still awful!
Aug 08, 2015 04:10PM Add a comment
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Kaitlin
Kaitlin is on page 45 of 208
Not sure about this one. Not a fan of the writing style and the punctuation is terrible, run-on sentences and such.
Aug 08, 2015 01:18PM Add a comment
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Ava Guinto
Ava Guinto is 72% done
it's okay so far...
Dec 25, 2013 12:14PM Add a comment
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