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Jery Schober
is 58% done
Still shaking my head in wonder at the total lack of respect for the king from any of his subjects.
— Sep 12, 2016 12:14PM
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Jery Schober
is 38% done
Wow. This is awful. Really, really awful. All tell, no show. Example? MC watching a parade, thinking to himself: "This was quite exciting." Whoa, sends just shivers of excitement down my spine reading ALL. THIS. EMOTION.
The author obviously has no idea about history, sociology, politics or an ounce of common sense. I doubt she ever read a good fantasy book. Maybe fairy tales.
— Sep 08, 2016 09:38AM
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The author obviously has no idea about history, sociology, politics or an ounce of common sense. I doubt she ever read a good fantasy book. Maybe fairy tales.
Jery Schober
is 16% done
The slave not acting like a slave, the prince not behaving like a prince, but the mage filling every stereotype there is - I'm confused.
— Sep 06, 2016 01:32AM
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Chancey "Does not give out 5's like candy" Knowles
is 72% done
Who is running the kingdom now that the king is dead and they are on this quest?
— May 31, 2015 11:25AM
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Chancey "Does not give out 5's like candy" Knowles
is 71% done
He wonders if his mom knows yet? That makes no sense. They weren't that many days out when the king was assassinated. Then his small party traveled on to their destination. Which took a few days. Travelled to the seers house. Spent time. Got on a boat. Spent days. Got off the boat and found the Miller. Spent nearly a week. How could his mom not know?
— May 31, 2015 11:24AM
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