Status Updates From Deceitfully Yours

I have a strange feeling of deja vu here! But wait, he's not a billionaire... I think

Wow. That's harsh..

Isn't this a bit to fast? Need interaction, people. More tension!

I don't like writing bad reviews, but I was NEVER able to overcome the grammar in this story. Instead I was counting errors on pages because I was so flabbergasted, the highest I counted was 18...review to come.

This could possibly be the most poorly punctuated book I have ever read. Paragraphs run together and statements from multiple characters are on the same reading line. I read a few consumer reviews and no one mentioned grammar. Was I given a different version?

Ugh...made it through 2.5 and there are 9 typos. It's spacing issues, lack of or too many, but seriously 2.5 pages!

Awesome. A little fast paced but still really good. Review to come.

Wowza.

Can't put it down. So good. I am on edge with this story.

This is getting good.

Dom. Dungeon. Yes!

Digging this, so far.