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Savy is on page 2 of 240
This could possibly be the most poorly punctuated book I have ever read. Paragraphs run together and statements from multiple characters are on the same reading line. I read a few consumer reviews and no one mentioned grammar. Was I given a different version?
Jan 05, 2014 09:11PM
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Savy
Savy is on page 238 of 240
I don't like writing bad reviews, but I was NEVER able to overcome the grammar in this story. Instead I was counting errors on pages because I was so flabbergasted, the highest I counted was 18...review to come.
Jan 07, 2014 08:11PM
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Savy
Savy is on page 2 of 240
Ugh...made it through 2.5 and there are 9 typos. It's spacing issues, lack of or too many, but seriously 2.5 pages!
Jan 05, 2014 07:20PM
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